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Wednesday, March 11, 2009

When I feel like writing a poem..

While going through the lyrics of certain songs, I wonder how people manage to write such beautiful lines. At certain times, I get inspired up to an extent that I try writing some lines on my own. But as soon as I finish, I would have come to know that it's nothing but trash. This one comes under the same category, though I posted it here. The only difference is that, now I'm having a blog where I can post anything without hesitation. Actually I wrote this a few days back, and I've almost forgotten what crap was in my mind when I wrote this. So it will be unfair to give a title now.

being honest, I would be extremely happy if anyone atleast calls this a poem !!


I looked around, with some pain
deep in my heart, reminding me
of the things that happened, and
of the things which were yet to come

Sometimes, I can't breathe
I struggle, gasping all the time
Sometimes, I can't see
It's darkness all around

I feel like screaming loudly
And letting the thoughts out
But it all can change in a flash
And I just don't know how it does.

One moment, I see the impending disaster
And in the next, I wonder
How I managed to get here
On top of the cliff of hope

On the brink, always I would say
Putting me in chaos all the time
But that's what my life is at the moment,
And I don't have any regrets for it

2 comments:

Kala said...

Not so bad....pretty good...

Roshan said...

Wow...it s a beautiful poem....
da,did u edit mine???

it s not a crap....i feel same as you...

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